[Writing] For Amythis and others, I give you new stories!

[elfs]

I promised many months ago that I would finish these and put them up, and so, after much consideration, tweaking, tuning, and adjusting of continuity, I have:

• The Mystic Treefort: Orgy In August
• The Mystic Treefort: Sodomy In September
• The Mystic Treefort: Nymphs In November
• The Mystic Treefort: Decadence In December

Comments

[amythis.livejournal.com]

"Sodomy" typos:

Noun missing in "And then was still."

"...as Henri's mouth slip up the length..." Should be either "slid" or "slipped."

I didn't enjoy this adventure as much as the "Rome" one, but then I didn't expect to. (And, yes, I've seen Marat/Sade, and didn't enjoy it except for some of the music.) I hope Jack has some sex he can truly enjoy soon.

[elfs.livejournal.com]

It's not supposed to be a nice one, yeah. They weren't, always. Don't worry; the story ends on a high note, and I managed to pull off everything I wanted without being mean. I think that's a key point when doing fanfic; you have to love the characters in the original, or you can't do it justice.

[amythis.livejournal.com]

I think that's a key point when doing fanfic; you have to love the characters in the original, or you can't do it justice.

Well, obviously I agree with that. :-)

Not surprisingly, the third story is more my cup of tea, although I'm amused that poor Jack still gets the worst of the adventure.



"Nymph" typos:

if she kept her eyes opened.... It seems like it should be "open" instead since she hadn't just opened them. But that might be style more than grammar.

The woman smile was....

...if he ever become comfortable....

...Sappho grasped an Annie's gift.... Word missing? Or did you mean "on" rather than "an"?

...as one after another preclimax pleasures.... Should probably be either "as, one after another, preclimax pleasures," or "as one after another preclimax pleasure."

...one to many.... "too"