Unwriting

[elfs]

I've been unwriting for the past three days. Rhiane & Ilonca's arc has lost over 2200 words of extraneous stuff and nonsense, filler, writerisms, grammatical errors, and one whole scene. It's still not as moving as it should be but it's definitely getting better. More importantly, I've introduced important characters early, dealt with the heterogenity of the Sterling culture, and solidified the worldsbuilding that my characters inhabit.

It's been pretty good. And it's helping to establish Jacie & Emma's setting for the next arc.