Latest story: Dreamteam Calamaties, Katrina

[elfs]

The latest episode in the Dreamteam Calamaties series, Katrina, has been posted. This story is more like it, a Ken-and-some-hot-confused-chick story. It's fun. Enjoy!

Comments

No bad

[dg1.livejournal.com]

Just scanning through people's journal. Someone mention you in their's, so I took a peek.

Someone new to the LJ

Re: No bad

[http://users.livejournal.com/dominic-m-/]

::hopes you have a partial clue on what youve stumbled upon friend::

:-p

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[dg1.livejournal.com]

Partial clue:

Why was he mad? There is no elaboration there. There is no drama to assemble the reason why. To me it’s just too plain, makes me want to skip the conversation and get right to the sex scene, ( No Emotional Four Play )didn’t have direct line ~ hook and sink ~ in catching my attention to bother reading or enjoying the sex scene. Maybe this fruity girl can.::

( o )( o )

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[(Anonymous)]

1. This is part of a series, if you go back and read the first three it will make a bit more sense. It's sorta like reading the last chapter of a book and complaining that the characters weren't adequately developed. If you want a good stand-alone story I'd recommend The Visitor (http://www.drizzle.com/~elf/journals/03259_191_000_The_Visitor.html).

2. The word you're looking for is foreplay.

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[elfs.livejournal.com]

Heh. No, I don't mind people wandering in and reading my journal; if I did, I'd make the damn thing private/friends-only. But the stories are meant to have conversation; the Journal Entries is mostly a reaction to the all-porn-no-plot writing tha dominated the Internet sex writers scene in the late 1980's.

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[flying-pegasus.livejournal.com]

Have fun jerking it off...it's been written and it's hot with Emotional stimulation. Really dude...go have fun.

It's Emotional Climax not fools balling...or...your term is. You all got it all wrong. Come on start thinking like me, you all start to understanding me better. Then again the whole world would be a plain jane world salad, without bacon bits, cheese, tomatoes, and Salad Dressing to company it...

Your opinion on Elf but your Mean.

I like it

[flying-pegasus.livejournal.com]

Just struck a nerve...it's in my journal. My verse of it, in bold. Sorry it had to be done. Just read, not like I kill it.