"Dreamteam Calamaties: Wish" published (and fixed)

[elfs]

Wowsers. I woke up this morning to find that the autopublish feature had worked just great, but the AFT engine had messed up on a pair of unbalanced italicization tokens so I had to go into the story source code by hand and fix the error. It should all be good this morning.

And remember, the main thrust (so to speak) of this series was originally to get Shardik laid as much as possible. It didn't work out quite that way, but there's still a lot of smut in this six-episode mini.

Oh, and you can put these next two on your calendar. Note that they start two weeks after the end of Dreamteam Calamaties, and are two weeks apart. These one-a-week mini-series spoil y'all.

• Aug 27: Journal Entry 042 / 1042: A New Home
• Sep 10: Journal Entry 103 / 1175: Nudes Defending a Staircase

Comments

A few little issues

[(Anonymous)]

Continuity: "touched a button on the desk that disappeared even as I pressed it", but then there's many actions relative to the desk (shoulder resting, walking around, etc.).

Missing Word?: "I envied P'nyssa than ability."

Re: A few little issues

[elfs.livejournal.com]

"It" refers to the button, not the desk. Sorry that wasn't clear.

The second is a typo: "than" -> that.

Fixed, thanks!

Re: A few little issues

[(Anonymous)]

"It" refers to the button, not the desk. Sorry that wasn't clear

Ah, I should have read closer. The precedent to it was indeed the button.

However, in an age centuries after personal air vehicles that pack themselves into the handlebar when not in use (can't find it now but I'm sure I read it) , a disappearing desk didn't seem that unreasonable :).