Attn Muse: An unexpected thank you.
Aug. 28th, 2007 12:51 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
elfsFrom: Production
To: Principal Muse
Subject: An unexpected thank you.
I know the Caprice Starr series doesn't look promising right now and we'd all much rather be doing other things, but it is still the current assignment for the next ninety days or so.
That said, I would like to thank you for delivering the final plot twist for Nymphs in November this morning. I believe that the continuity of all four chapters is not terribly fractured at this point, the themes are believable, the ending credible, and the connecting scenes line up adequately. It is now being sent to post-production for spell checking and final review. The total word count of 27,295 is likewise impressive. That's novella territory. Well done!
That said, please explain your latest plot twist in Caprice Starr. Production doesn't quite understand your intentions in taking "the second highest-scoring student ever to come out of the academy" and giving her "the scuttiest assignment the BRTP has to offer." Are we still going with the fractured council theory?
To: Principal Muse
Subject: An unexpected thank you.
I know the Caprice Starr series doesn't look promising right now and we'd all much rather be doing other things, but it is still the current assignment for the next ninety days or so.
That said, I would like to thank you for delivering the final plot twist for Nymphs in November this morning. I believe that the continuity of all four chapters is not terribly fractured at this point, the themes are believable, the ending credible, and the connecting scenes line up adequately. It is now being sent to post-production for spell checking and final review. The total word count of 27,295 is likewise impressive. That's novella territory. Well done!
That said, please explain your latest plot twist in Caprice Starr. Production doesn't quite understand your intentions in taking "the second highest-scoring student ever to come out of the academy" and giving her "the scuttiest assignment the BRTP has to offer." Are we still going with the fractured council theory?
